Writing with Limitations

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I chose this piece to revise because I really enjoyed what I wrote about but there were so many problems with it. It was very repetitive and had little voice so I knew I could improve it. I thought the story was really fun so I wanted to improve upon it and really make it better. There were a lot of grammatical errors and there were a lot of words that could have been changed and that's why I wanted to fix this piece. There were many opportunities for improvement despite the word limitations and I wanted to make the best of that.

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