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Literacy Narrative Revised Multi-Draft Essay

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This was one of my favorite pieces to write because although we've written narratives before this class, this was the most fun one to write and they were never quite this long. This narrative really tested me because after watching that video on "exploding the moment", it really made me rethink how I should go about my essay. This essay was our first multi-draft essay and I definitely knew it could be improved especially after the many activities we did in our Writer's Notebook. I received a 3 on my voice and so I wanted to focus on that along with my ideas and organization. I knew I could improve on my voice after the activity we did that focused mainly on voice and so I tried to add some more informal language that sounded more like what I would say. It was my point of view so it has to sound like me. Then with my ideas and organization, I tried to connect my ideas more so they would flow better. My paragraphs would then be organized in a way to make it more purposeful.

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